The rocks were sharp and biting on his feet as Gabriel gingerly made his way to the cove. The cold wind stung his face like tiny bees. The sky was darkening and soon the bewitching hour of twilight would possess this part of the world.
He finally reached sandy ground and found a shady area to rest his feet while earnestly watching the sea all the while. The water was calm and the breeze was warm. The place was eerily quiet. There was no bird chirping nor insect buzzing. It was as if the place was holding its breath, waiting silently for something.
Soon soft splashes of water could be heard echoing in the air like the sound from a seashell. Ripples and ripples of water rolled and glistened nearer and nearer to the shore.
Gabriel got up excitedly and ran to the sea. He waded through a shallow path and climbed up a rock to have a better view. He could see tails bopping up and down as they swam towards the eastern coast. As they swam further east, he lost sight of them. The sea was calm again. He held one hand over his eyes and squinted to see if he could still spot any one of them.
He pouted his lips, disappointed that they have all left so soon. As he turned to go, he heard a giggle behind him. He spun round quickly like a child playing hide-and-seek. A splash of sea water hit his face and more giggles were heard. A tail disappeared into the water.
“Princess, I know it’s you.” Gabriel shouted. “Show yourself!” He stretched his 12 year old body fully to have a better view of the water surrounding the rock.
A head emerged from the water and a face as sweet as a plum beamed up at Gabriel. She propped herself further up a small rock and brushed her golden hair with her hands, ignoring him.
Gabriel smiled at her. ”I know you won’t leave without saying hi to me.” He sat down beside her.
Princess made a face at him. “Don’t be so sure.”
“But do sing me a song,” she added with a sigh. Gabriel noticed the melancholy tone in her voice.
He sang and she hummed along for a couple of minutes before she told him, she had to go.
“How’s Gramps?”
“She’s better.” Gabriel answered, his eyes looking towards the village where he stayed with Gramps. “She’s not crying too much. I wish they could find Victor soon.”
“I miss you,” he added softly.
Princess looked up at his dark brown eyes, so unlike the green ones she was used to. Now, his hair was darker, almost black.
“Your father and mother miss you too. You must know that. Should we tell them?”
“No!” Gabriel remarked. “Please don’t say anything yet. I know it’s bad of me to keep this from them but you know I’ve to do this.”
Princess let out another sigh. “I’ll get Eller and Elsie to get their people to work faster. They’re already flying their wings off to reach more areas. Then, we can soon be united again.”
They smiled at each other.
“You better go before they suspect something.” Gabriel got up and waved her off. “Goodbye and see you again next week.”
“Goodbye,” Princess whispered as she dived into the water quickly so that he would not see the tears in her eyes. A flap of her tail pushed her far to the sea.
Ooh, a cliffhanger! This is good, Autumn. I hate to guess what’s going on here so I’ll just wait for part 2.
By: Chris on August 27, 2008
at 12:05 am
Wow, Autumn, what a ‘page turner’ I was enthralled. I looked forward to part two.
Thanks, David
By: David M on August 27, 2008
at 6:04 am
can’t wait for the next part, I like that you have some glimpse into Princess’s emotions, I am wondering about the mysteries about his parents and the Princess
great first part
By: lissa on August 27, 2008
at 3:03 pm
more more more!!! i have only just begun here!!!! excellent!!!
By: paisley on August 27, 2008
at 3:46 pm
Well done Autumn. What a great romp in the sand and seaspray with a tender message too. Great use of the prompt. G
By: Geraldine on August 27, 2008
at 9:30 pm
Autumn, you can’t leave us like this. Oh, this is too good. Please, please develop this. Absolutely magical!
By: Selma on August 28, 2008
at 12:46 pm
Chris, David, Lissa, Paisley, Geraldine, Selma,
You are all such wonderful people. Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement.
However, I’m afraid I’ve to write Part 2 later as I’ll be busy shifting stuff tomorrow and through the weekend due to my office relocation. But the moment I can, I’ll post Part 2.
Again, thanks for stopping by to read and comment.
By: Autumn on August 28, 2008
at 3:36 pm
wow – I must know how this ends! I only hope I catch the next installment. I would like to get involved in fiction writing soon, maybe this winter when life slows down.
I wanted to let you know I am finalizing the first two chapters of Slice of Life Sunday, the book, for submission to the publisher on Friday, September 5th. The first chapter is now entitled, The Foundation Years and features stories from earliest memory to about age 10-11. The second chapter is called, The Wonder Years and features stories from age 12 to 19-20. I you want, http://sliceoflifesunday.wordpress.com/slice-of-life-sunday/ will take you to the page which shows the prompts and authors of stories already selected to be included. If you would like to have another story considered, or if you have not submitted one in any of these categories, please leave a comment with link to your story on the current Slice of Life post no later than Wednesday, September 3rd. I am so pleased with the how the chapters have evolved. I have had two people, one a trusted English professor and the other being probably the best critic I could ever hope for, read the chapters. Both were blown away by the diversity of the stories and remarked how accurate a total picture is given of real life. Thank you so much for helping make a dream come true! We could all be published authors soon!
By: Cricket on August 29, 2008
at 12:36 am
I can’t wait for the next part, I just love a mystery and I must admit I’m really not sure at all where this is going – which is of course perfect
By: Kayt on August 29, 2008
at 8:17 pm
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By: Tales Of Mermaids « Search Engine Stories on August 30, 2008
at 11:02 am
Cricket – thanks for dropping by to read and comment. I really don’t have much time to write but I’ll stop by your blog to have a look later. Cheers, Autumn.
Kayt – Thanks for your kind comments. Appreciate your stopping by. Regards, Autumn.
Selma – Thanks again for the wonderful prompt. I’ve gotten the outline of the story in my mind and thinking of expanding the story but I’m trying to work out the cliches. I’ll see what I can do for the next part. Best, Autumn.
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at 4:42 pm
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