Hide And Seek – Part IV
Telephone rang, keyboard dit dit ditting,
printer vomited paper after paper,
rain washed off footprints from the catwalk
and minds paused to re-assess the puzzle,
counting the sides to the polygon.
Gloom invaded the office like a virus
and people, hiding their cough, examined
the future like a specimen,
I wait like a candle in the mist
for the rain to stop and I can see
who will pass the light through the prism.
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The rest of the series can be read here.
This is excellent Autumn. What a unique take on the prompt. Evocative and succinct.
By: Geraldine on November 13, 2008
at 12:11 am
Geraldine – you got to this before I could post it to Selma’s searchengine fiction site 🙂 Thanks for your encouraging comments.
Re: my avatar (I think I read somewhere on your comments – thanks) – it’s sort of a self portrait.
By: Autumn on November 13, 2008
at 3:19 pm
I love this! Seems like a prose poem to me, and there are so many excellent lines “…keyboard dit dit ditting…” and “…people, hiding their cough, examined the future like a specimen…” are my favorites. I also love how compact and crisp this is – there seems no wasted words at all. Really nice – thanks for the great read!
By: Kayt on November 13, 2008
at 8:18 pm
I enjoyed reading your poem, Autumn. Thanks for posting it. DavidM
By: DavidM on November 14, 2008
at 4:43 am
‘Examined the future like a specimen’ is such a brilliant line. There is such precision in this but also such vividness in the imagery. You really can write!
By: Selma on November 16, 2008
at 10:53 am
Kayt, thanks for stopping by to read and for your kind compliments.
David, thanks for stopping by again and leaving your comments. Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Selma, thanks for your kind compliments and continued support. Appreciate it.
Cheers all,
Autumn
By: Autumn on November 17, 2008
at 1:55 pm